#3
OH damn yeah i gotta change that pic its getting old!!!
Thanks alot
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#4
wow sounds like an old vinyl in its rudimenteri-ness. not what i was expecting at all either. im no big folk guy and i really hate bob dylan (great lyrics though, of course) but sounds to me like a perfectly acceptable folk song. sounded like the guitar was out of time at a few parts though so maybe work on that a bit.

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#5
Hey! This tune is very quirky. I like that. I like the tone in your voice, but you should turn them up a bit. They get kind of lost in the mix. I also think the piano(?) should be pushed back a little. That way, the guitar and other instruments can have their time to shine. With a little tweaking this song could be gold. You've got a lot of potential. I also liked your song "Cover Your Ears". Hope to hear more. And thanks for the crit on my nirvana cover. Rock On!
#6
It sounds pretty good. I didn't listen too much into it because I really dislike Bob Dylan's music. sorry.
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#7
Not realy a fan of this sort of stuff but i can honestly say that i really enjoyed this!
Make the vox just a little louder and it'll be perfect!
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#8
Thanks everybody. I know its not gonna be perfect, im having a hard time multitrack recording, i fixed the piano, the voice stands out alot more, and i really trimmed alot of the garbled bass, so it sounds much cleaner, ill have it up later, but thanks alot for your opinions and tips it really helped
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#9
It was cool, only thing i hear that can be improved is the chorus is played to much, try to change it up . Or maybe i needa change my ears, one or the other.