#2
it started off a little slow but once it got going this track was pretty damn cool

that clean break about halfway through was awesome, the best part. my only suggestion would be don't cut it out so soon when the distorted guitar comes in. i bet it would sound good all the way till the solo, and maybe even during that? you'd have to see

good work on the solo, one note i think was off, everything else was good

you really should keep workin on this track dude