#1
Chorus:
I hear them whisper right beside me
(There they are, not too far from the council of humble elders with expensive cars)
I see them pointing, judging, laughing,
(Here you stay, woke up one day to find you've become the only thing you've learned to hate)
And I hate this, I hate this
And it pushes me away
Can't stand this, can't stand this
Cause it pushes me away


Verses:
Lost cause at this point
Twelve hours ago you said you'd
Promise salvation
And now it's all just crashing down
Lost souls circle 'round
Faithless, clueless, nowhere to go
What is the truth
Every replica now dictates
Your loss

Where did you go
Follow the pattern, little lamb
We sense you move
How dare you think you've got a choice
We have seen you
Now living however you want to
We don't approve
You're not good enough, not pure enough
Like us

I can't, I won't
Just accept all of these laws
There must be some
Safe way out of this trap
Help me, save me
Born into this holy cage
When will I be
The man I've always strained to be
Tell me

Hush now my son
It's not too late yet don't you fret
You can still have
What only we're entitled to
Don't joke, don't play
Unless you want to join the damned
Come now my pet
You've been taught better than this
Give in

Outro:
Can't take this, won't take this
Can't stand this, you planned this
Can't take this, I hate this
I hate this
No
I refuse
To be a zombie just like you
I said no
I refuse
To be taken and forsaken
No
I refuse
To be a brain dead slave like you
I said no
I refuse
To be taken and forsaken
Taken and forsaken
Taken and forsaken
By your false hope
Last edited by spidersonic at Jan 28, 2009,
#2
hmmm...I like it, but the chorus seems weird (the parts on parentheses). When I read lyrics, I always have a melody in my head, and the () parts just didn't fit. I also don't get the "council of elders..." part. I'm assuming it means rich, old, judgemental people. Other than that, tho, I liked the verses and outro. Especially the outro, which is exactly what I stand for. I give you 3.5/4 stars.
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#3
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hmmm...I like it, but the chorus seems weird (the parts on parentheses). When I read lyrics, I always have a melody in my head, and the () parts just didn't fit. I also don't get the "council of elders..." part. I'm assuming it means rich, old, judgemental people. Other than that, tho, I liked the verses and outro. Especially the outro, which is exactly what I stand for. I give you 3.5/4 stars.


Thank you for your input;

The parts in the parentheses are rapped or sung quickly while the note on the line before it is being held. It sounds weird, but think Linkin Park or something like that. And yeah, the council of elders are old hypocritical people, specific people I know but my audience can relate to some people like that I'm sure. Thanks again