This is a real rough, rough draft of a song i have, and i figured i'd post it. not sure of the genre or anything, i just wrote it for writing practice.

comments, crits, the like. you know, thanks in advance.
Last edited by george8392 at Jan 28, 2009,
i hated the intro to be honest, but the next bit was really really cool. i loved the chords. it sounds really emotional. its uber repeditive though.