#1
Its a song i just recorded, it took me roughly five minutes. Its not the best quality but please tell me what you guys think. Its in my profile.
Thanks guys.

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#3
The drums aren't really appropriate for this type of music, so I would say change them.
The beginning guitar solo is ok, a bit sloppy and needs a better tone, but I can see you have skills, the riffs are really good the growls are good too but they need to be turned down a little.

Overall pretty good, 8/10.

Crit mine: https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1057117
#4
hahaha

good stuff, it made me laugh (thats not bad)....

it doesn't really seem structured, so thats my biggest criticism, you should add some structure to your music...

I imagine your recording gear was pretty primitive, the tone was a little too high endy, move the mic at an angle... if u were using a mic.
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#5
oh, and off center of the speaker cone.
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#7
lol... it was kind of just a joke song that i did in 5 minutes. But thank you for all of the crit.
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