#1
Axis of denial

Agony, therefore he marches
Fear of stagnation, evading delay
He carries the cross of eternal salvation
Through prosperity
Throughout decay

Subliminal, his purpose in life
Omitted by rough reality
Since time is short for a deciphered Messiah
Night after night
… he marches on


Chorus:
Thousands of ignorant people
That swing to the axis of denial
Blinded, enchained
By the stain of society
Worshipping their beloved enemy

Hate, enforcing his trial
Hate for the helpless, naïve and enslaved
Someday, (Justified!) will be his belief
The last hope for mankind
The last chance for peace


Chorus:
Thousands of ignorant people
That swing to the axis of denial
Blinded, enchained
By the stain of society
Worshipping their beloved enemy



My first song, please tell me what you think.
#2
This would work (in my eyes) as a death metal song. Well at least with a low sounding scream. Also I can feel there would be quit a bit of galloping in it. Lol. That's just my opinon though. Great song overall!
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#3
Awesome job, man!

I think it would work with a low scream or a low growl type of voice, but that's just my opinion.
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