#1
Sucking in the rigid air
Trying to stifle my despair
Empty breaths and empty words
Mind is crippled, thoughts deterred.

Chorus:

Marching up the peak
With our eyes blinded we start to speak
Searching for the answer to the question
Indignation towards nature's mason
Screaming with excitation
Overwhelmed with realization.

[Slower, quieter]
The masterful tongue
Defeats the masterful sword
Love for the siren's wail
(No escape)
Your thoughts are forever moored.

Chorus:

Marching up the peak
With our eyes blinded we start to speak
Searching for the answer to the question
Indignation towards nature's mason
Screaming with excitation
Overwhelmed with realization.


Questioning my physicality
Cannot defeat this diseased mentality
Upon hearing the lies, our demands are met
Embrace the comfort, it's all you're gonna get.

[Semi-scream, holding out last syllable]
Just open your eyes

This song is complex just to read, because the rhythm changes and the changes from hard to soft make it difficult to read it with flow without the music.

Also, it ends with a guitar solo, with the last syllable of the lyrics continuing into the beginning of the solo.

Critiques? Opinions?
Quote by Ur all $h1t
I stick stuff in my pee hole.

Gear:

Schecter C-1 Classic
Ibanez S670PB
Stratocaster MIM Standard
Marshall MG30 (its purple )
Dunlop Crybaby Wah
#2
Nice. I love it.
Quote by J.Bass.M

I don't care about the f***ing radius of the f***ing inlay.
#3
Quote by TheMeltdown
Nice. I love it.


Hey, thanks
Quote by Ur all $h1t
I stick stuff in my pee hole.

Gear:

Schecter C-1 Classic
Ibanez S670PB
Stratocaster MIM Standard
Marshall MG30 (its purple )
Dunlop Crybaby Wah