#1
C4C

Just played the whole thing through, it sounds amazing. Tell me what you think.

Decisions (Best Left Up)
I noticed you
You saw right through me again

I noticed you
I headed quickly to try and enter
Decisions best left up to get in

I noticed you
And you saw right through me again

You told me welcome one and all
The meaning slipped my mind each time
But the colors were all true
When I noticed you

I noticed you
You saw right through me again

I noticed you
Your deepest darkest blinding bright
Decisions best left up to give in

You told me welcome one and all
The meaning slipped my mind each time
But the colors were all true
When I noticed you


I noticed you
I saw right through to the end
And yet again
Sustaining remedy also the enemy

I followed the wrong path, the wrong mind
It left me blind, and I can easily see
How far I’ve come and now I can’t walk back
In the end I told you, I told you, I told you

I told you to leave once and for all
Ache came from thought, ache came from the heart
But the colors were all blue
When I became you
#2
Other than repetition of "I noticed you," I like this!
I'm sure there's nothing wrong with the repetition though.
Maybe you can teach me a thing or two about writing lol.

What genre will this end up being?

Anyway, great work.
I want to see more.