#1
Well, this song's really just a mishmash of riffs. I don't like the way I go from part to part, but hey - give it a listen if you will

I don't like the last riff all that much either, was just trying to take the piece in a different direction. I am ready and willing to remove it :P


Cheers,
Gerbs
Attachments:
scale.zip
#2
Pretty random but over all was ok. generic but ok!
"We carry death out of the village!"
#3
i really liked the solos, but the main riff gets a little dull. the outro is pretty sweet though. All in all, nice work. Maybe try to add a little bit to the main riff
#4
Aye, it's not an outro as such, it's just as far as i've got. I suppose fills and suchlike just to break it up?