As you can tell, this song is not in its final form... it definitely needs some polishing, and real lyrics (the ones I used are just from a friend's email about a trip he took). Either way, please, please comment and tell me what you think of the song and whether or not I should work on it some more. Its still a pretty early song for me... I'm a bit new to songwriting...
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I really liked the song. It has great potential, and I can almost hear it like a finished songs with drums and bass n' all that. I'll have to say, though, that the mixing is not that good. It's a shame that the guitar is that much louder than the vocals. Though the solo-guitar has a great volume compared to the rythm guitar. Really liked the solo's by the way, it's nice with that clean sound.
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Sir, Awesome stuff. You have my respect!
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aw i love your song! sell it n' it would deffo be a smash!
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this is great. you've got the words!
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... Wauw... It really paints a picture and leaves the rest up to the imagination!