#1
C4C

This was kind of a hard song for me to write. Back in July of 2008 I fell deeply in love with this one girl from my work. To sum it up, she liked me and I messed it up. It is a relationship that I still haven't really gotten over and it really haunts me every time I think about it. Yea of course I still have feelings for her but I am also going out with this one perfectly nice girl who is making me forget about her. It is basically about my transition from me first seeing my current girlfriend and never thinking about the past girl, to thinking about the past girl and comparing the two, to realizing I am wasting my time, and overall concludes in the last stanza about how it is just something that is going to have to pass in time. Enjoy

Feel I'm finally stepping out
of the grave yard shift you tend.
I got my mind to settle down
so I can be repaired again.

Felt this moment slipping fast
as I started to compare.
To the silhouette that passed;
to the one who's never there.

(And) I fear that I am wasted lines.
That outlive the one I surrendered.
Your ghost is gone; I'm wasting time.
With a hope this won't last forever

Staccato stares and empty lies;
a phrase that I could never reach.
A nerve that keeps me up all night;
it's one that helps me feel asleep


I also really need a new title. Suggestions?
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Last edited by WlCmToTheJungle at Feb 1, 2009,
#2
anyone eh? I didn't think the lyrics were THAT bad, haha.
My Gear:
Fender American Deluxe Stratocaster
Epiphone Sheraton II
Fender Blues Deluxe Reissue
Teese RMC Picture Wah
MXR Carbon Copy
Keeley Modded TS9
Korg Pitchblack
Schecter Omen 6
Dean Performer Acoustic

#3
well, normally i'm not all for "love songs" but that ones pretty decent. as for the title, thats all you man. it's your piece, you get to name it.
#4
Quote by z4twenny
well, normally i'm not all for "love songs" but that ones pretty decent. as for the title, thats all you man. it's your piece, you get to name it.


do you have any suggestions? I really appreciate your comment.
My Gear:
Fender American Deluxe Stratocaster
Epiphone Sheraton II
Fender Blues Deluxe Reissue
Teese RMC Picture Wah
MXR Carbon Copy
Keeley Modded TS9
Korg Pitchblack
Schecter Omen 6
Dean Performer Acoustic

#5
suggestions for what? the lyrics? i couldn't say right off the top of my head since i dont know really what kind of song its supposed to be (metal/pop rock/country/etc)
#6
Quote by z4twenny
suggestions for what? the lyrics? i couldn't say right off the top of my head since i dont know really what kind of song its supposed to be (metal/pop rock/country/etc)


check out Untitled Demo January 3rd in my profile, it is the beginning workings of this song
My Gear:
Fender American Deluxe Stratocaster
Epiphone Sheraton II
Fender Blues Deluxe Reissue
Teese RMC Picture Wah
MXR Carbon Copy
Keeley Modded TS9
Korg Pitchblack
Schecter Omen 6
Dean Performer Acoustic