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Me and my buddy got together and we wrote a hard rock/hard blues kinda song about a hooker trying to get off the streets. its still in progress but so far this is what we have. Any suggestions or comments?

Love Slave


Verse: Played by the Man,
Tricked you to take his hand,
And now your payin’ with your life,
It’s so sad you’re a…

Chorus: Love Slave, Watcha gonna do X2
Run, while you can,
Run, for your life

Verse: Workin’ 9 to 5,
That ain’t true for you,
Your shift starts midnight,
And that’s too bad for you.

Chorus: Love Slave, Watcha gonna do X2
Run, while you can,
Run, for your life

Interlude: Honey grew up,
Trying to make it in the world,
But then she went and lost her way,

Gonna make it far,
Never gonna look back,
But the man led her astray,

Now she’s a free girl,
Never again to be…

Outro (chorus): Love Slave,
Look what you’ve done,

Free Girl,
Look what you’ve done
Gear:
Epiphone Sg-400 standard
Epiphone DR 100 VS
Fender FM 212
Boss ME-50