#1
Haven't posted here in forever. This is one of my band's newer songs. "New York in a Liquid Dress". Obvious influences are Dance Gavin Dance and The Fall of Troy. Also influenced by Thursday and a little As Cities Burn.

Check it out, leave a comment. You crit me, I'll crit you.
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New York.zip
Last edited by SGxMastodonxSG at Feb 1, 2009,
#4
this is pretty cool, but i like how your other songs have more leads and less chords
also, this is a bit noisy but that might just be cause its guitar pro, but maybe you should tone it down somehow?
i like the way its structured, nothing gets old
#5
every one of your songs is gold.

I have nothing else to say. You truly have a talent for writing post hardcore.
...Nothing you've ever...
...Planned on ever turned out...
...The way you planned...


...You're still disappointing them...
#6
Easy 10/10. That was purely amazing. I was clapping along to it!

I write songs.
YOU SHOULD LISTEN TO THEM
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#8
That's pretty ****ing amazing dude. 10/10 ^^
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nice discovery, sir.


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#9
this is an awesome piece.
do you guys have a myspace page or
is there any demo songs available?