#1
Spring time in purgatory

You know everyone says
I have the keys….
Everybody calls me
By the names they see….
You may see the whites of my eyes
But what of the soul that’s underneath
And don’t be knights in shining armor
With no heart to shine beneath

Chorus
Cause oh you know I know where my road splits….
And oh wont I take the one that I see fit
And don’t help me please ill find my own way
I’ll embrace the unknown ill find out what impossible is.

Now I can’t play ball
With no ball or bat
And I can’t walk on glass with
This weight on my back
But oh I know My heart
My ball and soul my bat
And as long as I know this
They’ll be no weight upon my back

Chorus
Cause oh you know I know where my road splits….
And oh wont I take the one that I see fit
And don’t help me please ill find my own way
I’ll embrace the unknown ill find out what impossible is.

Now please don’t fret
It’s not as bad as the magazine say
And don’t let the bad guys
smite you with they’re glances
Cause I will stop the angry masses
And I will break the chains
and let you see again

Chorus
Cause oh you know I know where my road splits….
And oh wont I take the one that I see fit
And don’t help me please ill find my own way
I’ll embrace the unknown ill find out what impossible is.
#2
i found that really great. I'm into those kind of lyrics.

except the last verse.

great, especially the first verse and the chorus.


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#3
I don't dig the lyrics too much, but the song name's pretty cool, the use of contrast will get you far.
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#4
I like the chorus.
I don't like the repeat of ball in the second verse, it doesn't flow well
The rest was kinda average, and was hard to see the meaning of it
Hope this helped
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