#1
hey everyone, this is definately still a work in progress. but im just wondering what you think... its not heavy metal or anything. its kinda of like a punk-poppish type i guess. ANY SUGGESTIONS ABOUT ANYTHING WOULD BE GREATLY APPRECIATED. but here it is:


Need A Change


Verse 1:
baby i dont have time to wait for you
this life is on a path to somewhere
im to the point where i dont care
your chokin, slowin me down
i just need the air

Verse 2:
you asked me why i needed out
why all our pictures had you cut out
well i need a change from everything
that means its time for me to breakout
i see no future of you and me

Verse 3:
im underneath the sheets
hoping you dont find me
i dont want to run
but i dont know what to say
other than goodbye.
so baby press replay
but it'll all be the SAME (again)<<echo lightly

Chorus:
This is our first
anniversary of going nowhere
time not well wasted
i wish i would've stopped this earlier
now my head's in the ground
just let me keep it there
and please walk away from me
Last edited by OnMyPhone at Feb 2, 2009,
#2
Pop, Yes - Punk, Don't you dare.
Gear;
- B.C. Rich Warbeast Bloodbound
- B.C. Rich NT Zombie 5-String Bass
- BOSS GT-10 Multi Effects TANK!
...In other words, I'm taking a giant dump on fender owners who use pods.