#1
I worked on this quite some time yesterday and I'm very satisfied with the outcome! I'm very happy with drums on this song too. It is kinda inspired a bit by Gojira and some other things that I dont really know what it is. It is a bit longer than my other (complete) songs that I have written. Comment on anything you think might need a change.

C4C too btw...
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The Natural Being.zip
#2
It'd be great if some of it was faster and the whole song was put into a key.
There's so many out of key notes it turns me off for a professional crit.
Sorry.

Also fix some of your leads.
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#3
I'd say, good drums, but the rest isn't that good, they don't fit together.