#1
I know its not much right now but i wanna know if its worth continuing just cuz right now i dont relly have an oppinion of whether or not i like it. Any crit or input is appreciated. Thanks

You shine brighter then the sun
But still I cant close my eyes
Because a blind man in the dark
Can still find his way to the light

The tide rises in , Submerging my dreams
Drowning the thoughts of what i could've been
I'm like a captainless ship , Stranded out to sea
Hoping that your light can guide me home safely
#2
i think that it is worth continuing, i enjoyed it quite a bit

I'm like a captainless ship , Stranded out to sea
Hoping that your light can guide me home safely


- this part just seems a little funny to me, but i have no suggestions on how to improve it...so maybe it's just me. But yes, i would run with this one
To say of what is that it is not, or of what is not that it is, is false, while to say of what is that it is, and of what is not that it is not, is true.


#3
i think this is a good start for something you can really develop. the only thing is im kinda confused about the first stanza, i cant really figure it out.
eggs smell irate during midnight tea...