#1
ok so i wrote this song but i cant think of any good chord progressions or what time signature to put it in or even a title for the song. this is all ive got so far, let me know what you think:

i cant think, my minds blank, so tell me why
pain is strongest in absence of what you love,
why life has no justice for how i feel?
how you could force me into this mindless sorrow?

the sound of your voice was music to my ears
but your words could do nothing but destroy
all that i lived for, and everything i believed
so i severed the ties to all that exists just
to stop the pain

memories of the past are chained to my mind
and always bring my thoughts back to you
glimpses of your smile wont leave me alone
im powerless to forget anything about you
eggs smell irate during midnight tea...
#2
The lyrics look good.
But I don't know the melody so it's hard for me to tell you anything.
a s h l e y + s t r a n g e
#3
i added 2 more stanzas to the end and made some other minor changes. please leave your comments or ideas

i cant think, my minds blank, so tell me why
pain is strongest in absence of what you love?
why life has no justice for how i feel?
how you could force me into this mindless sorrow?

the sound of your voice was music to my ears
but your words could do nothing but destroy
all that i lived for and all that i believed
so i severed the ties to all that exists just
i have no regrets if it stops the pain

memories of the past are chained to my mind
and always bring my thoughts back to you
glimpses of your smile wont leave me alone
im powerless to forget anything about you

my heart was wrenched by your cruel intentions
that tore apart our bond limb by limb
left to rot in the abyss that is your heart
hidden from foreign discovery
a secret kept only between us

is there any significance to a life,
put to waste by those of your kind,
left to suffer under apathic beings
consumed by the impulse to injure?
eggs smell irate during midnight tea...