#2
First off, thanks for the comment on my track.

The piano in the beginning sounds too much like MIDI programming imo. You could use a "humanize" function on it to make it sound more human-like. I like the riffing part, which begins after the piano. I wonder if you could've come up with some piano melody that would've fitted behind the guitar riffs. Something like the melody that begins around the 1:00 mark. All in all, I reckon this gets a bit boring. It needs a lead instrument or some hook to keep the listener interested. I also noticed the lack of the bass instrument and crash cymbals. Production-wise, the kick drum could be a bit louder and have more "balls". Other than that, pretty well mixed. The drums could use a bit more compression, though. All in all, good tune. Keep it up!
#3
Really liked it man, especially the keyboard bit. What software do you use to record?

Only 2 cents I could give is a bit of fuzz or OD on the guitar parts nad maybe bring the drums up a touch
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#4
Thanks dude- I use Reaper to record, the keyboard was done by a VST plugin called Mda-piano, it was free.

I may look into that, I've heard good things about reason. I've been using EZDrummer for drum tracks
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#5
Dunno about your oppinion on non paid for software, but if you can use reaper look for somehthing called Reason and also get yourself a copy of Cubase (torrents), you can obviously play and I think a more complex keyboard and drum sound would make that song awesome
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