Show me please becuse/cuz
heavens were I want to be
Why cant I see
what you've ever done for me

(And) If not let me be
let me die in peace
so just let me be
let my soul wonder free
definitely a good start, sounds pretty fluent, could work with many rhythyms, if anything i think its too plain but if thats what your lookin for than its good,
When I was in highschool 4 or 5 years ago my history teacher crapped herself (she had a problem, she was wearing dippers and all that but damn it was retarded and funny as hell).

You could hear the farts all over the classroom, lol.
Show me please, because
heaven's where I want to be
Why can't I see


its all dull.
Last edited by ginjaninja at Feb 3, 2009,