#1
Show me please becuse/cuz
heavens were I want to be
Why cant I see
what you've ever done for me

(And) If not let me be
let me die in peace
so just let me be
let my soul wonder free
#2
definitely a good start, sounds pretty fluent, could work with many rhythyms, if anything i think its too plain but if thats what your lookin for than its good,
When I was in highschool 4 or 5 years ago my history teacher crapped herself (she had a problem, she was wearing dippers and all that but damn it was retarded and funny as hell).

You could hear the farts all over the classroom, lol.
#3
Show me please, because
heaven's where I want to be
Why can't I see


fannywidgets.

its all dull.
Last edited by ginjaninja at Feb 3, 2009,