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http://ca.youtube.com/watch?v=n_qRTy9Hz3k

What do you guys think? Any comments about what i could have done better?

I was going to change the line "stars in her eyes" to "blaster on her thigh".
i shwung and i shwinged
but it never really shwang
Last edited by toobsok at Feb 4, 2009,