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Here's one I've cobbled together while I've been snowed in these last few days.
C4C (please leave a link and I'll get back to you eventually)

Groundhog Day in England

One more question, then a couple more
I’ll ask until my throat gets sore.
Could we really be together?
Can a groundhog predict the weather?

Who cares about this political view?
Well I do, how about you?
You could throw a shoe at that politician
Or get some real ammunition.

When I wake up it’s all the same
How long must I play this game?
Stood out in the pouring rain,
To make all my mistakes again.

Every morning when I watch the news
National grid’s nearly blown its fuse
And another Union’s gone on strike
I thought Thatcher had taken a hike.

I wake up still in my little hole.
Feel the futility in my soul.
Brush the snow from off my hair
How many weeks left of winter are there?

When I wake up it’s all the same
How long must I play this game?
Stood out in the pouring rain,
To make all my mistakes again.

The snow brings England to a halt
But I take it with a pinch of salt.
Then you call for someone’s head
And blame some Fascist instead.

They’re doing their best I try to say
But if I’m wrong then fire away.
I could wander outside through the gathering fog
For I’m the English Groundhog.

When I wake up it’s all the same
How long must I play this game?
Stood out in the pouring rain,
To make all my mistakes again.
Half Iago, half Fu Manchu, all bastard.
Last edited by justsam at Feb 14, 2009,
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I really wish i had more too say, but it seems great too me, you read mine and you know im not exactly experienced so, maybe some other more expreienced and better people could give you some crit
well this is bump pretty much
thanks for the crit on my
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#3
Thanks for getting back to me. I hope you post some more stuff too.
Half Iago, half Fu Manchu, all bastard.