#1
I wrote this with my band.

'Shades of Grey'

I see you smile at me,
and I'm not sure what to do.
I don't know how I should take it,
But I know how I feel about you.

Shades of Grey,
Are all I see when you're not with me.
Shades of Grey,
And I just can't seem to find the light.
Shades of Grey,
I just can't wait to be with you.
Shades of Grey,
The daylight fades into the night.
Like Shades of Grey.

I feel the rain drop on my shoulder,
Everytime you leave the room.
Baby, when you're not around me,
My bright day it turns to gloom.

dr. Q
#2
Very nicely written song here!

I especially like how you're always refering to the weather, like "daylight", "rain drop", "bright day", etc. , because it seems to connect the whole song by a common theme.

Finish it and do a recording or something, i want to see what you make out of this musically.
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