#1
Randomness off the top of my head. I wonder if it means anything

Something went missing
Will it ever be discovered
Your head is still dripping
You swore I'd be sheltered

The second last lap
In an unfinished race
But I know I'm the victor
The one they call ace

Crowded streets below
Someone calls up my name
A look to uphold
One driven with fame

You swore it was safe
I'd get home alright
Face hidden with pain
The answer in sight

Theorize your fate
Hypothesize your plan
Tantalize him now
Forsake him again
Last edited by JordanRRR at Feb 3, 2009,
#2
Sounds like its got something to do with being loved/cherished by either one person or society and then getting "left for dead" so-to-speak. I like it!

You may wanna change the last line of the first verse to something like "You swore I'd be sheltered" rather than "I swore you'd be sheltered". It changes the meaning to fit in better with the song (IMO).
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#3
Quote by Oheric
You may wanna change the last line of the first verse to something like "You swore I'd be sheltered" rather than "I swore you'd be sheltered". It changes the meaning to fit in better with the song (IMO).


You are a smart man. That makes it sound 100x better so I changed it accordingly.