#1
New song only 2 Min. and change
please give it a listen
Experimental, Lyrical, Rock

you will find it here
http://www.myspace.com/nightembers1

Feedback would be nice, Id love to know what Im doin Wrong or right
and feel free to check out my other stuff, fyi: all my songs are very diverse
so ur bound to like one of them
#2
Maybe make the vocals fit a little better into the track, but the groovy music was def. Cool. Im not good at mixing vocals, but a little reverb can make it mesh with the song quite well.
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