#1
Here's a song i wrote a little ago. i hope you like. Please don't pay too much attention on spelling errors. C4C


A Phoenix Is Nothing Compared To Me

Broken
But immortal
shattered
but still spoken
risen
like a phoenix
iam

awoken
by the maddnes
healing
but still broken
risen
like a phoenix
i am

And while
the beating
fades away
it's time
for a change
it's time
to arrange
what i
will become

fading
in the distance
returning
as a changed man
risen
like a phoenix
i am

completed
but still missing
one piece
that fits here
risen
like a phoenix
i am

And while
the beating
fades away
it's time
for a change
it's time
to arrange
what i
will become

yes
what i
will become

is
me.
Gear

-Schecter Tempest Custom
-Ibanez EW20WNE-NT
-Digitech Bad Monkey
-Boss TU-3
-Boss NS-2
-ibanez PM7
#2
No one?
Gear

-Schecter Tempest Custom
-Ibanez EW20WNE-NT
-Digitech Bad Monkey
-Boss TU-3
-Boss NS-2
-ibanez PM7
#3
i geuss this song really s*cks?
Gear

-Schecter Tempest Custom
-Ibanez EW20WNE-NT
-Digitech Bad Monkey
-Boss TU-3
-Boss NS-2
-ibanez PM7
#4
If you want people to crit your piece, criticize others and leave a link. Most get back to you eventually.

Also reported for triple posting