Here is my 2nd attempt at writing lyrics any constructive criticism would be greatly appreciated

Every thing is new and exciting
They take to me walk with me
They say they are my friend
I put in everything I’ve got
I do everything that I can
They call me there brother
They say it’s for life

The passion burns in side me
I can think of nothing else
I would die for them
It becomes my life

They abuse me misuse me
Taken for granted all they want is more
I say there’s a problem
That they just ignore
I try to escape they will not allow it , not without a fight

They say they want to help me but all they do is hurt
They call themselves brothers but all they do is fight
They say they are there for me but I only see them at night