#1
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And what is more, there's been a bloody purple nose and some bloody purple clothes that were messing up the lobby floor. It's just apartment house rules so all you 'partment fools remember : one man's ceiling is another man's floor.
Last edited by Mister.Y at Aug 23, 2016,
#3
I don't know if it's gramatically correct, but I find this :

"When heavy clouds helplessly fly,
Blocking the sun and darkening the sky"

flowing better. For me anyway.

The rest is really good. Can you have a look at the one in my sig plz ?