#1
baby i love it when you put my t-shirt on
spend the night girl and ill sing your favorite song
but it seems as if your gonna kick me out into the cold
but i say we stick around and see how things unfold

power dont present in the form of a pistol
love cant be bought with silver or gold
the day i saw her i knew my heart was sold
i got it all but all i want is krystal

i hope you know just how much you mean to me
but if your gonna leave me then just let me be
we ll go our separate ways down the paths of life
and dont think twice its alright

to see you baby you know i try
but youve gone and got yourself another guy
it looks like your over me
ill get my jewel eventually

power dont present in the form of a pistol
love cant be bought with silver or gold
the day i saw her i knew my heart was sold
i got it all but all i want is krystal

solo

power dont present in the form of a pistol
love cant be bought with silver or gold
the day i saw her i knew my heart was sold
i got it all but all i want is krystal

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#2
It's a nice little lovesong. I think it's a tad cliché sometimes, but it's rather catchy as well. Somehow I really like the first line.

And shouldn't it be:
'power doesn't present in the form of a pistol'

Nice job.
And what is more, there's been a bloody purple nose and some bloody purple clothes that were messing up the lobby floor. It's just apartment house rules so all you 'partment fools remember : one man's ceiling is another man's floor.
#3
Like the above user said, it is cliche, which is okay since I have a few songs like that.
I like this piece and you are obvious with your point, the only thing I don't like about this is that it seems to jump around a bit. Like, you do keep things connected, but the emotions seem kinda jumpy.
But you did a good job at getting your point across without making things repetitive or boring, so kudos on a solid piece man :]