#1
I decided i wanted to do a song for my birthday :P


anyway, some crit on the riffs and stuff would be nice and as always, ill crit your stuff.

Changed my setup a bit, used a Rock Band mic, really moving up in the world!
#2
thanks for the crit man! I already left one on your last track too

this track is good stuff man, its very unorthodox but i like that. the panning part at the beginning was well done, built up a nice atmosphere for the distorted guitar to kick in. great riffing as usual, i dig the chugging. i like your tone a lot, im not really sure the rock band mic does it justice. the rhythm parts sound really good but a few of the lead parts are crackly.

the whole track has a cool ominous feel to it, like something really bad or f-ed up is about to happen, or maybe is happening. well written, the dual guitar parts mesh and support eachother well

and last but not least.... get a drum program =]
if you dont want drums thats fine but i think it would up the headbang factor! ezdrummer and drumkit from hell are easy to use and easy to find

and happy birthday dude!
#3
Great track man!

Like the intro, and there's some pretty amazing riffs in there too! Great sound considering you were using a rock band mic too haha!

Had a great groove to it, would be mind-blowing with some drums backing it up! Like the other guy said, theres a few good programs out there than are easy to use that arn't too hard to get.

Good luck with everything, and happy birthday!
#4
Thanks for the crit guys - the only reason i sont put drum tracks on my songs is because i usually ship em off for a friend of mine to have a go at making up some drum tracks, and he doesnt have any recording equipment heh