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Just wanted some feedback on what you guys think, this is my first real attempt at lyrics. Thanks!


Your face said something was wrong,
and I've been waiting all week long
Our short life falls before my eyes,
half expecting it was all a lie.
Those pretty lips move,
but I can only think of you.
And she says

Baby we've had our fun, but your one and done
and all I can do is watch you as you run.

We used to drive around, top down,
one hand on the wheel the other in mine
our voices intertwined in the air
and the music flows through your golden hair.
I'm drifting off and she says

We've had our fun, baby your one and done
and all I can do is watch you as you run.

We fall into your bed tearing off that bright red sweater
tracing your curves without your parents knowing better
and I feel it through and through all while I'm gripping you
holding the seams together you burst ---
out the door and I'm lying there wanting more
while your yelling

We've had our fun, baby your one and done
and all I can do is watch you as you run...away
Guitars
Fender American Strat
Gibson SG

Amps & Effects

Fender Superchamp XD
Digitech RP-3
Boss SD-1
Last edited by austinb0309 at Feb 5, 2009,