#1
Okay this is only half finished, and my first song too. See what you think, if I'm heading in the right direction:
(bold=beastly low pitch growl, Italic=falseto growl, normal=spoken)

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(VERSE)
As the draws near, ready for attack...
We show no mercy! Prepare for bloodbath!
Innocent rulers, slayed in the night....
Revenge on Cthulu, he will surely die!!!!!!
Arghh! Charge! To damnation and hell! Prepare!
I...I smell blood want kill eat decapitate slaughter slay ripp off head bloodlust hatred instict...
(CHORUS)
All this time, wasting away you ain't gonna see, another ****ing day! OH! Never have I ever felt a pang of fear and ah I never have thought about this 'death'. That Cthulu, be may die!
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Hope it wasn't to cheesy...
キタ━━━━(・∀・)━━━━!!
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Last edited by Shredoftheday at Feb 9, 2009,
#2
bump
EDIT: Woops, sorry mods didn't read rules before posting but read them now. Go ahead and warn me
キタ━━━━(・∀・)━━━━!!
Quote by Ichikurosaki
shred knows more about everything than anyone i think

Quote by IchiKurosaki
i hope we never meet shjred honestly i love you but im scared of you
Last edited by Shredoftheday at Feb 7, 2009,
#3
Sorry for getting to this so late.

In the first, line, "as the draws near,", as what draws near ?

Need to read the rest to see if it's too cheesy or not. And hear it with music to see how the rhythm goes. ^^
#4
Quote by UVER
Sorry for getting to this so late.

In the first, line, "as the draws near,", as what draws near ?

Need to read the rest to see if it's too cheesy or not. And hear it with music to see how the rhythm goes. ^^

Thats okay

'The' is referring to 'The Cthulu' since there is only one cthulu it would be appropriate to label it 'the' ?

Oh and just so you don't get more confused allow me to point out that the song does switch points of views from the main character (a knight who is trying to kill cthulu with the rest of the army at his command) to Cthulu himself the the quiet a number of times.
I have edited my post so you can tell this: the beastly growl vocal is only used when the story is being told from Cthulu's point of view. Should have more lyrics up soon, thx.

EDIT: The song is symbolic too but that's for me Guess if you want.
キタ━━━━(・∀・)━━━━!!
Quote by Ichikurosaki
shred knows more about everything than anyone i think

Quote by IchiKurosaki
i hope we never meet shjred honestly i love you but im scared of you
Last edited by Shredoftheday at Feb 9, 2009,