New Song Bliss- Any helpfull tips or ideas to make it better welcome

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Chorus:

Oh baby why can't we just be
Toghther for eternity
Oh don't you see your the girl for me

Verse#1:

Found you one summer night
We were feelin' it right
Tought we would be together
Wished that summer would last forever

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Verse#2:

Eventually that summer would end
You were my girlfriend
but I let you slip away, and you went home
Now I am alone
Wishin' you were by my side
All I have left of you are the memories inside

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Verse#3:

The memories of your kiss
They last inside me in eternal bliss
One day I will find you again
We can pickup where we let it end
When my lips meet your kiss
Lasting forever in eternal bliss

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