#1
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EdLssHLA2z0

Here's a quick video I shot, I'd love some feedback on it. I'm working on it still, it's kinda rough to play. I've been playing for about a year and a half now.

Thanks guys.
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#2
how come everyone with a black jackson on youtube can always sweep amazingly
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#3
Very good indeed, your spped beats mine, but i must admit it was kinda choppy. but over allit was good

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#4
Yep, choppy was the word I was thinking of too. Heh.

I listened to yours and I gotta say it was pretty awesome. Really clean, but your tone kinda threw the entire thing off because it wasn't distorted. Also kinda slow like you said, but I'm sure you can fix that.
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"No, they are acoustic instruments."
"Acoustic? What's that? Oh you mean a grampa's guitar?"
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#5
Slightly off-time here and there but still very impressive. Keep working on it and you'll have it down in no time.
#6
Holy Jesus that was amazing.
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#7
Quote by PETERFKNPARKER
how come everyone with a black jackson on youtube can always sweep amazingly



good point

dude nice playin it was brutal (as in good)

there was on part on the trem picking around 21 sec i think u just need to make that a little more smooth then u have it down amazing job



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#8
very good job dude, couple of minor mistakes here but nothing that was overly noticable. 4.5/5

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#9
Quote by PETERFKNPARKER
how come everyone with a black jackson on youtube can always sweep amazingly
lol, because Jackson's pwn. I've had my DKMG for like, 8 months, and I find it's just an amazing guitar for almost any style.

Also, there a few botched notes, but nothing serious. Better than I can do on them (yet). Might do Alaska soon though, that had some sick sweeps in it. any, 4/5, good job. C4C? Here's my thread post:
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=18596662#post18596662