#1
Verse 1

I once heard...
That seasons change,
But people don't
I gotta say that i beg to differ

Ive seen it with my own eyes
Ive felt it in my soul
There's something out of place here
like snowflakes in the summer sun

Half -Chorus

There's a coldness in this once warm place
There's a strangeness in a once familiar face

Verse2

Your slowly changing
I can feel it in my heart
Your telling me thing are just fine
But i know that they aren't

Chorus
There's a coldness in this once warm place
There's a strangeness in a once familiar face
I used to know you so well, but now Im at a loss
I just hope this time wasn't all for not

Bridge
Ive been by your side through thick and thin
Sheltered you despite you sins
And now all I'm asking is the truth

Is what I am not what you want?
It used to be, have you forgot?
I'm holding on to these memories
But there only memories...

There's a coldness in this once warm place
There's a strangeness in your once familiar face....


1st song so be gentle. Positive criticism is welcome : )
The timing is pretty cool I think. If I get enough positive feedback, I'll record it for you guys to hear. Thanks.
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#2
i liked the idea you gave off..its a great idea

and i liked it overall

but some areas need work

the last line of the chorus for example..it just seems out of place

i get the idea though


C4C?

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1063154
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#3
Quote by amazing FretMan
i liked the idea you gave off..its a great idea

and i liked it overall

but some areas need work

the last line of the chorus for example..it just seems out of place

i get the idea though


C4C?

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1063154


ya, its a weak line. Tried to rhyme tho and thats the first thing that popped into my head. I always go with my first thought and then re-tool it later. thanks : )
Quote by fob12
If he even admits she's hot, we have another problem altogether.



Quote by dreamtheater91
I would hate 3D porn.
*unzips guys pants*
*giant shlong in your face*
"It's coming right at me!"
#4
Quote by Element182
ya, its a weak line. Tried to rhyme tho and thats the first thing that popped into my head. I always go with my first thought and then re-tool it later. thanks : )



your welcome man =]

and thanks for reviewing mine =]

i like the direction your going with though..keep up the good work!
Quote by jsbud11
Dude your leetness is maximum.
Seriously if you leave UG without becoming a mod, I will kill someone.
Quote by Devopast
This is turning into fap-to-amazingfretman's-love-a-thon