#1
So yeah, I created this with a friend where we each traded off lines over IM, and this is what we got. Tell us what you think!

-------------- Verse 1 ------------------

The lights in the city mix with my desire
And in the darkness i cringe and weep
While they crowd around the blazing fire
Shadows start to creep

I wander till I see no more
Another dead end in my life
But it's time for death to take its toll
When my neck's slit with a knife

------------- Chorus --------------

Through these times
I know I'll make it to the end
But if I die
I want you to know it was to defend

Your life!

I wanted it
I thought that it may never be mine
Let it sit
Before you know it's lost behind

-------------- Verse 2 ----------------

It's burning down
The place that you called home
Hear the sound
Take a step into unknown

Trouble brews in the air
Condemned by the lies that put you here
Does anybody care?
'Cause nobody knows this dispair

------------- Chorus --------------

Through these times
I know I'll make it to the end
But if I die
I want you to know it was to defend

Your life!

I wanted it
I thought that it may never be mine
Let it sit
Before you know it's lost behind

That's as far as we got. Thanks in advance!
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THE WHO
#2
Bump? Anybody? Any comments?
Gibson Les Paul Traditional Pro
Fender Blues Jr.
Dunlop Crybaby Wah
Ibanez Tubescreamer TS9

THE WHO
#3
Please read the rules of the S&L forum, with particular concentration on those regarding thread titling and bumping. Then you can delete this and repost
There's only one thing we can do to thwart the plot of these albino shape-shifting lizard BITCHES!