#1
She stares like I’m the ocean and the moons fallen into me.
This isn’t love is it?
Assure me, or leave me on the shore.

I’ll wrap her up in a paperback novel,
She’ll never talk, and I’d prefer it be that way.
She’ll never be afforded the opportunity to break my heart.

She stares like I’m the ocean and the moons fallen into me.
This isn’t love is it?

I’ve done this before and thought about it,
Repeating and refraining,
This is only the beginning.

She stares like I’m the ocean and the moons fallen into me.
This isn’t love is it?
Assure me, or leave me on the shore.
#2
The only thing i didn't like here was this line:
"She’ll never be afforded the opportunity to break my heart."
that felt a little weak compared to the rest of this. Apart from that, a solid work, very enjoyable.
#3
I thought this was a very interesting piece. The images are quite hard to decipher, but in a good way - it leaves it very open to interpretation. I have my ideas on what it might mean, but I can't say I'm a hundred percent.

But I think that's the good thing about it - I spent about ten minutes gazing into space thinking about it, trying to work out what it meant, and I conjured up even more images than the ones the words described, and so for that I'd say congratulations - I think if a piece makes you think and conjures up something for you, it has been successful.

As I said, I couldn't guess exactly what you mean, but I have my own interpretation, and I think if it means something different to each person, then it has a wider appeal.

Have a look at mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=18527208#post18527208