#2
Quote by Gibson06
In profile, called just an idea.

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the riff is good nice fat beefy sound, what settings you got on it?
the solo though is a bit off needs more variation to it, move round the neck more, slow and fast bits mix it up a bit. it's good but i think you have the stones to make it better.see if you can add some drums to it, they will help you with the lead work.
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#3
I thought it was great, drums would make it better. I'm sure about this but experiment with a lead riff of the main river you already have.
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#4
Quote by metal105
the riff is good nice fat beefy sound, what settings you got on it?
the solo though is a bit off needs more variation to it, move round the neck more, slow and fast bits mix it up a bit. it's good but i think you have the stones to make it better.see if you can add some drums to it, they will help you with the lead work.
peace

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MIM strat
Behringer gmx210
drive: 10
Low: 8
Mid: 4
High: 9

And will do.

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#5
Hey, I'd agree about the solo, it sounds as though you pretty much know which notes to get to, but try and find those notes elsewhere on the fretboard, my best advice would be to try and slow down and get more of a melody into it, it seems you've got the ability you just need to get more emotion into it =) backing riff was cool though!

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#6
Pretty sweet riff there i liked the way the second guitar comes in definatly! the only real problem i found (besides no drums :p) was that the solo thing had EXACTLY the same tone as the riff.. maybe mess around with the equalizer, go less bass and more mid for a more soloey sound and what pickup position are you using? cuz i think the solo would sound better using only the bridge pick up
#7
I like the panning on the guitars, I think the one on panned to the right could be a little louder... but, it just got about even now as I'm listening and I like it. Catchy little riffs you've got here.

The solo sounds pretty good too. This song does sound like it could use drums with it for sure. I'm not too fond of the ending, it just ends a little abruptly I think, but it is just an idea for now like you said. Good job.

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#8
Sounds great! Of course it needs drums etc but like you say it’s just an idea…. Look forward to hearing a finished version. Keep it up.

Peace.

Phil.
#9
Quote by Gibson06
MIM strat
Behringer gmx210
drive: 10
Low: 8
Mid: 4
High: 9

And will do.

Thanks guys.

cheers for the setup.