This is the first section of my soon to be epic.

Genre is electro dance. Main instument is a guitar although it is packed down with efax.

Some crit plz?

The songs on my profile - Heavy Airship.

A heavy airship? That would quite possibly be a Le(a)d Zeppelin, would it not? =P

I like the sound of it, would be interested to see what the rest sounds like. What software (or hardware) did you use for the synth sounds? One thing I can think of that would make it even better, maybe give the kick drum a little more presence, it seems to get lost in the mix. Other than that, good!

(you've already listened to it, now just for the feedback )