#1
this is my most prized piece of work..its what i consider my best...all crits are appreciated


Midnight Run
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It's midnight, we're all alone

900 miles away from home

Rambling, out in the dark

In history we'll make out mark

No moonlight, cant find our way

In this world, there is no day

Wandering around, but no one knows

that there was death, standing on our toes

*solo 1*

In the dark, in the cold
We never do as we are told

The escape of death, mystery
with every step comes victory

Tragedy, we lost our way
still rambling, to this day

*solo 2*
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Seriously if you leave UG without becoming a mod, I will kill someone.
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#2
I think there was way to much ryhming, just my opinion though.maybe post a GP track that goes with it for a better idea of how it would sound.
#3
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I think there was way to much ryhming, just my opinion though.maybe post a GP track that goes with it for a better idea of how it would sound.



could you recommend me some recording software thats a free download? so i can do that for you?
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Seriously if you leave UG without becoming a mod, I will kill someone.
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#4
ok check my profile to hear the music..i think i just put it up
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Seriously if you leave UG without becoming a mod, I will kill someone.
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#5
Hey try using audacity for computer software recording. Just google it ( It's free!! =D ) oh and about this piece. Just like the other one you put up. The rhyming was a bit bland and I didn't like the scheme. Really try to flush out that vocabulary and try to distinguish what you want to say without cheesy rhymes ok?? peace out.