#1
I thought up the working title "Synchopath" since its pretty synchopated and polyrhythmic. Let me know what you think. This is what I have so far. I think their will be singing starting over that last riff. C4c!

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#2
First off, you already get my props for being a DT fan

The piece seems to be very dissonant, a technique of metal obviously. I like the time changes you throw in there. You could do a lot with the dual guitar parts in this recording, one just sort of seems to linger rather than playing an active role.

A very metal piece there, obvious progressive influence, clean playing, good composition, a great tune that has potential to expand

This is my latest
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=18526886#post18526886
"I feel sorry for James Blunt, he has to wake up every morning and think 'Ah man, I'm James Blunt'"
#5
Glad you all like it so far. I'm gonna do some experimenting with dual guitars, good idea. I think I know where its gonna go next. I will try to get to your guys' tunes later. Thanks!