I thought up the working title "Synchopath" since its pretty synchopated and polyrhythmic. Let me know what you think. This is what I have so far. I think their will be singing starting over that last riff. C4c!

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First off, you already get my props for being a DT fan

The piece seems to be very dissonant, a technique of metal obviously. I like the time changes you throw in there. You could do a lot with the dual guitar parts in this recording, one just sort of seems to linger rather than playing an active role.

A very metal piece there, obvious progressive influence, clean playing, good composition, a great tune that has potential to expand

This is my latest
"I feel sorry for James Blunt, he has to wake up every morning and think 'Ah man, I'm James Blunt'"
Glad you all like it so far. I'm gonna do some experimenting with dual guitars, good idea. I think I know where its gonna go next. I will try to get to your guys' tunes later. Thanks!