burn the stars
Registered User
Join date: Sep 2006
287 IQ
#1
my first tab. sorry no drums im having a hard time with them if anyone wants to give adding some a shot itd be awesome. crit would be great too!
Attachments:
gp5 songs.zip
winterXsolstice
Registered User
Join date: Jun 2007
116 IQ
#2
The parts show some promises, as a whole its pretty disjointed and doesn't flow. You also need to ad an actual rhythm to the acoustic guitar.
creeping.death!
Coffee powered.
Join date: Nov 2007
587 IQ
#3
The first part of the song is quite good. A bit generic maybe, but good nonetheless. The acoustic part does need work; you need to add a rythmn to it, otherwise it sounds boring and dull.
The last riff repeats itself way to much, and it's not even that interesting to begin with. I'd make the second guitar play some different notes there.

Overall, Not bad for a first song, but it needs work.

By the way, I added some drums to it, check the attachment .


Mind critting mine? It's the link in my sig.
Attachments:
black china.zip
burn the stars
Registered User
Join date: Sep 2006
287 IQ
#4
thanks for the input and the drums guys, ill work on the acoustic part tonight.