#1
I was used to be your toy
Your unnecessary boy
I was used to be puppet
Just handled like a muppet

I've never seen your heart
Never known that you're such a tard

Sunshine in your eyes
You are such a *****
Sunshine in your eyes
Never crying before
Sunshine in your eyes
My world is so grey
Sunshine in your eyes
Just wanna slide away

I was used to be your slave
Had to live like in a cave
I was used to be your flame
Used to hide your shame

I've never seen your heart
Now I know you're such a tard

Sunshine in your eyes
You are such a *****
Sunshine in your eyes
I have never cryied before
Sunshine in your eyes
My world is so grey
Sunshine in your eyes
Just want to slide away

My fury collects in me
I only want to be free
So I cut up your neck
Please don't pull it back
I've never seen you that before
Throw you away from the sunny shore

Sunshine was in your eyes
You were such a *****
Sunshine was in your eyes
I had never cryied before
Sunshine was in your eyes
My world was so grey
Sunshine was in your eyes
Just wanted slide away
Last edited by Ibanez_K7-rockz at Feb 13, 2009,
#2
Quote by Ibanez_K7-rockz
I was used to be your toy
Your unnecessary boy
I was used to be puppet
Just handled like a muppet

I've never seen your heart
Never known that you're such a tard

Sunshine in your eyes
You are such a hore
Sunshine in your eyes
Never crying before
Sunshine in your eyes
My world is so grey
Sunshine in your eyes
Just wanna slide away

I was used to be your slave
Had to live like in a cave
I was used to be your flame
Used to hide your shame

I've never seen your heart
Now I know you're such a tard

Sunshine in your eyes
You are such a hore
Sunshine in your eyes
I have never cryied before
Sunshine in your eyes
My world is so grey
Sunshine in your eyes
Just want to slide away

My fury collects in me
I only want to be free
So I cut up your neck
Please don't pull it back
I've never seen you that before
Throw you away from the sunny shore

Sunshine was in your eyes
You were such a hore
Sunshine was in your eyes
I had never cryied before
Sunshine was in your eyes
My world was so grey
Sunshine was in your eyes
Just wanted slide away


It's spelt 'W-hore'.
And the rhyming of puppet with muppet made me cringe.
This is very mediocre at best.
#3
Quote by Ibanez_K7-rockz
I was used to be your toy
Your unnecessary boy
I was used to be puppet
Just handled like a muppet

the rhyming seems forced to me and the sentences don't really make sense.

I've never seen your heart
Never known that you're such a tard

when i hear someone say tard in a song im probably not going to take it seriously

Sunshine in your eyes
You are such a hore *****
Sunshine in your eyes
Never crying before
Sunshine in your eyes
My world is so grey
Sunshine in your eyes
Just wanna slide away

the rhyming seems really forced and this doesnt hit me because its cliche and sounds kind of winy

I was used to be your slave
Had to live like in a cave

what are you a high school girl? take out like and use something else if your going to keep this.

I was used to be your flame
Used to hide your shame

not every line has to rhyme its not a dr. suess book

I've never seen your heart
Now I know you're such a tard

Sunshine in your eyes
You are such a hore *****
Sunshine in your eyes
I have never cryied before cried wtf?
Sunshine in your eyes
My world is so grey
Sunshine in your eyes
Just want to slide away

My fury collects in me
I only want to be free
So I cut up your neck
Please don't pull it back
I've never seen you that before that way before?
Throw you away from the sunny shore

Sunshine was in your eyes
You were such a hore
Sunshine was in your eyes
I had never cryied before
Sunshine was in your eyes
My world was so grey
Sunshine was in your eyes
Just wanted slide away


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