#1
Haven't wrote in a long, long time...IMO, this is terrible. You know what they say though, always finish what you start!

I'd just like to know
Deception outlines the feelings you show
You're as transparent as a glass house
Nothin to you, that I can't figure out
Yet, you've got me up against the wall
'Cuz I'd be a liar if I said
I didn't give you wood for the fire

How do you do it
Makin' me believe
When it's nothin'
Good for me
I see the devil
Behind your blue eyes
I see your intentions
In your lovely little lies

Months now
I've been a victim
Just your punching bag
I want you, to want me
Yet he's got everything
That I've always had
So why do you look away
Just to see whos around
I have a feelin your searchin
Looks like youve found me

How do you do it
Makin' me believe
When it's nothin'
Good for me
I see the devil
Behind your blue eyes
I see your intentions
In your lovely little lies

Shattered ambition
The skin hangs from my bones
You've torn me to pieces
Left me alone..
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#3
How do you do it
Makin' me believe
When it's nothin'
Good for me
I see the devil
Behind your blue eyes
I see your intentions
In your lovely little lies

This is the chorus I believe?
I think that this is pretty good and has potential, but I don't rate the verses to high. Maybe use the chorus for a different song?

C4C
There's a special sex move I do called the Charizard.
It's where you light the girls pubes, then put it out with your cum and run around the room flapping your arms screaming, "You don't have enough badges to train me!"