FiestaItaliano
Registered User
Join date: Jul 2008
266 IQ
#1
Check out my profile. "New Metal Song"

c4c?

btw, all i use is fender strat, thunderbird bass, garageband and 1/4" to 1/8" adapter. oh yeah, and addictive drums
Mah Geah:
The Dreaded T-Bird
Ampeg BA115
Boss Bass Synth
Boss Bass Overdrive
Blue Steel Strings
Clayton Picks
Monster Cables

Coheed and Cambria: Rush, Iron Maiden, and Star Wars had a baby.
Sean Duffy
UG's Classic Prog Kid
Join date: Mar 2008
338 IQ
#2
Amazing! Some great riffs, the track has a great groove to it. I love the part at 02:17-02:32, sounds really good! Drums are well done also.

And damn, you get this sound out of that gear!

Nice track, I liked it very much.

You can crit mine, although yours puts it to shame completely. xD Here it is; https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1057800
jayeshrc
Registered User
Join date: Mar 2007
611 IQ
#3
pretty cool ideas there man.. Nice intro too.. The sound quality was good too.. Drums were really well done too.. Write some more stuff soon! (duffy your riffs were damn cool too man. I think the same way you're thinkin every time i hear scattered.. :P ) oh and crit my rough song idea please.. Its on my profile..
diablo_man
UG's only denman hippy!
Join date: Jul 2005
830 IQ
#4
great track. the part before the drums comes in speeds up a couple of times. and the odd timing issue where the only real complaints i had with this track.
at 0:57 the second chord is much quieter than the rest, sounds bad. rest of it is a-ok!
oh and the last guitar riff, is much too lightly played. either turn up the gain or just beat a a little harder on each note.


C4c?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1065820
thanks!