#1
alright i like this girl and im scared to tell her cause were so close as friends, but as close as we are she had to move to canada, so here it goes tell me what you think.

ive been up all night thinkin of you
and i dont know if i should be
were so close but still so far apart
im wondering, are you thinking of me too?

now im a little scared
and i know my words arent to good
but maybe we could give this romance thing a shot
because i know id give it all i got

the way you laugh
and the way we talk
the words flow with ease
but im still to scared to say

can you tell?
or is it just me?
is there a connection?
or just a dream?


thanks alot for reading
and even more thanks for what you think
#2
ive been up all night thinkin of you
and i dont know if i should be
were so close but still so far apart
im wondering, are you thinking of me too?


This verse could do with a little work. Ditch the third line; it's too cliched. The rest is OK, but doesn't seem to flow that well.

now im a little scared
and i know my words arent to good
but maybe we could give this romance thing a shot
because i know id give it all i got


The first three lines again aren't anything new, but at least they come off more sincere. 4th line is again a bit cliched IMO.

the way you laugh
and the way we talk
the words flow with ease
but im still to scared to say

can you tell?
or is it just me?
is there a connection?
or just a dream?


The best verse, and a good, slightly haunting closer emphasised by the rhetorical questions.
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