Oh man that was pretty great, Not alot to crit besides saying it was actually enjoyable listening to!

You got a nice voice, Nice guitar.
I only noticed you begin to play faster in the chorus but just a little.

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Dude, I think I would know, Trivium invented Thrash, Metallica are lucky they got as far as they did piggy-backing off of Trivium's signature style.