Pman666
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#1
I put an original verison of this song on here before and its in my sig actually, so u could compare em i guess, but this version is a lot more mellow and it kinda has the feeling of there being a story happening in it. idk, im kinda high right now and im listening to it and im happy with the results, but it mite just be cuz, ya know. Thanks everyone..
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Macabre_Turtle
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Join date: Oct 2006
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#2
Wow, dude. All I can say is truly epic. I can see this being a great album closer. I have nothing bad to say about, but if you're looking for ideas to add, I would say have some overlapping vocals near the end. i don't mean like, harmonizing. I mean like... what MCR does in The Black Parade and Famous Last Words. I'm pretty sure both of those songs do what I'm talking about. The transition out of the acoustic part is astounding.

C4C?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1066677
Seth Shadows
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Join date: Sep 2006
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#3
This would be good if it wasnt such a "Forever and Always" ripoff.
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Carl6661
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Join date: Oct 2007
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#4
Quote by Seth Shadows
This would be good if it wasnt such a "Forever and Always" ripoff.


As much as I would love to disagree because of Seth Shadows uncomprehendable (I think that's the right word anyways) hatred of Avenged', I have to agree.

I mean, it's good song, great infact. It's just too much like Forever & Always.
The vocals melodys and such were cool, the only real downside was the annoying drum sound near the end.

I also dislike people talking about being high as if we should look up to them for it, I have no idea why but I find it rather irritating. Oh well.

Anyways, C4C?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1067314
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Last edited by Carl6661 at Feb 13, 2009,
Carl6661
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#6
Quote by Pman666
yeah its a shame cuz i wrote that main riff a while back, and then bfmv released forever and always and its always kinda bothered me but i dont know if i really wanna change that riff now or not...


Just change it. They have the copyrights, there's nothing you can do about it.
Unless you want the potentionally (spelling?!) be taken to court and fined and such for plagerism; regardless of whoever wrote the riff.
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lordofthefood1
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#8
Quote by Carl6661
Just change it. They have the copyrights, there's nothing you can do about it.
Unless you want the potentionally (spelling?!) be taken to court and fined and such for plagerism; regardless of whoever wrote the riff.

I don't think he would be sued for something like that, but who knows

(I didn't listen to this, nor have I listened to what is being referenced...
I might later)
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Carl6661
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#9
Quote by lordofthefood1
I don't think he would be sued for something like that, but who knows

(I didn't listen to this, nor have I listened to what is being referenced...
I might later)


Yeah, it's unlikely he would be. But it's probably not worth risking it. Unless he could prove he wrote the riff first, not sure how but yeah...
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aceral1715
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Join date: Mar 2007
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#10
dude, that was amazing. Really melodious and beatiful. Haven't heard that song by bfmv, so i cant really comment on that :P Nice use of keyboards in this song and its the first time ive heard anyone use a diffrent MIDI drum kit xD

C4C?

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