#1
Its on my UG profile.
Its definitly not the best recording at all, but it'll do for now until my band can get a gig and some street cred.

Its just the demo track. We're tracking the vocals and bass tomorrow

Crit would be very nice
#3
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I like the tune, but I think it needs to be a bit more tight before I'd listen to again, even if it's just a demo track.

I liked the breakdown though. How long have you guys been practicing this song?

C4C?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1066501



Lol quite sometime actually
We just recorded this all within maybe 1 hr. all together
We're gonna re-record it later and really take the time to get all the parts equalled out. We just kinda did this spur of the moment
#4
Final Demo is up on my profile with vox and bass

Please keep in mind this is our band first recording so it is a pretty noobish attempt lol

Our vocalist has never recorded before so he doesn't really know proper breathing technique yet so he sounds out of breath in certain places
#5
Sounds a lot better, except for the vocals, way too loud.

Peace bro.
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#6
I actually really liked that. from a songwriting perspective it was really cool, and your vocalist has a very full sounding scream. work on the mix though, even though I understand that its just a demo. just turn down the vocals and EQ them a little to blend in with the rest of the instruments, its something I can't really tell you how to do haha gotta do it by ear I guess.

It reminds me of something TDWP would do.

you might like my newest, https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1068074 if you want to check it out.
#7
Yeah im liking it man!
Sort out the sound and it'll be pretty tight!
I feel skanked though as i cant record properly and have to use guitar pro all the time lmao :p

Keep up the great tunes!
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"I am Osiris" at 2.22 i like how it goes "BA-BA-BA-BA---Ba-Ba-Ba-Ba---BA-BA--Ba-Ba-

its badass.


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