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Alright, I just finished the rough draft for my new song. I took some lines out of an old song and put new words and a new vocal melody to it. Tell me if you think it is any good.

Verse 1:
You were like the wind
I was a fire
You made me stronger
Erasing the anger
The monster I once was
All with a touch from you

Pre-Chorus:
Before I met you
I was broken and looking for answers
And when I met you
I was fixed with all the answers

Chorus:
Give me hand
Give me your heart
For I'm showing you
What I'm really like
For now I'm telling you
How I feel inside

Verse 2:
You were like an angel
And I was a sinner
You made me pure
Giving me clarity
Clairvoyant to see inside
For the first time in my life

Pre-Chorus:
Before I met you
I was broken and looking for answers
And when I met you
I was fixed with all the answers

Chorus:
Give me hand
Give me your heart
For I'm showing you
What I'm really like
For now I'm telling you
How I feel inside